CELPIP Writing Practice Test 9 — Email Task & Survey Task With Sample Responses

CELPIP Writing practice test 9: Task 1 email and Task 2 survey response with the official prompts and high-scoring sample responses you can study.

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CELPIP Writing practice test: two tasks in 53–60 minutes, both scored on the 1–12 CELPIP scale. Study the prompts, plan an answer, then compare with the sample response.

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Task 1 — Writing an Email

You are a fisheries officer in Halifax. Write an email to local boat owners advising them on hurricane season preparations. In your email, describe the necessary steps to protect their boats and ensure safety. Include details about securing the boat, checking equipment, and staying informed.

Suggested length: about 150 words.

Sample high-scoring response

Dear Boat Owners, As hurricane season approaches, I am writing to remind you of the importance of preparing your vessels well in advance. Over the past five years, we have seen an increase in storm frequency along the Nova Scotia coast, and even a category one hurricane can cause significant damage to unprepared boats. I strongly recommend the following steps. First, check that all mooring lines are in good condition and have enough slack to accommodate storm surges. Second, remove any loose equipment from decks, including fishing gear, crab pots, and buoys, as these can become dangerous projectiles in high winds. Third, ensure your bilge pumps are working and that batteries are fully charged. If possible, move smaller vessels to sheltered inland storage. The Halifax Harbour Authority has designated safe zones at the Dartmouth marina, and spaces are available on a first-come basis. Our office is offering free hull inspections this month. Please call my office at 902-555-0190 to book an appointment. I also encourage you to sign up for our emergency alert system at halifax.ca/stormalerts. Stay safe, Michael O'Brien Senior Fisheries Officer

Task 2 — Responding to Survey Questions

You are a city planner in Halifax. Write a survey email to residents asking for feedback on proposed changes to the ferry schedule. The changes include earlier morning trips and later evening trips weekdays, and reduced service on weekends. Explain the reasons for the changes and ask for their opinions.

Suggested length: about 150 words.

Sample high-scoring response

Thank you for giving residents the opportunity to provide input on the proposed changes to the Halifax Ferry Service. I have lived in Dartmouth for twelve years and have relied on the ferry as my primary way to get to my job downtown every weekday. While I appreciate the city's effort to modernize the service, I have significant concerns about two proposals. First, reducing weekend service from every thirty minutes to every hour would hurt tourism and make it harder for shift workers to reach their jobs. Many hospitality employees work Saturday and Sunday mornings and have no other transit option at that hour. Second, the idea of raising fares by fifteen percent without any improvement in winter reliability seems unfair. During the past two winters, I experienced at least a dozen delays due to ice and mechanical issues that were never properly communicated. I would support a smaller fare increase if funds were directed toward de-icing equipment and real-time tracking on the Halifax Transit app. Until those issues are addressed, I do not believe residents should pay more for unreliable service. I hope the council seriously considers this feedback before making a final decision. Respectfully, Janet MacDougall

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